Friday, 20 June 2014

Script for continuity editing filming


Character 1 walks slowly down corridor and approaches a doorway which Character 3 is standing outside, he begins to pat him down then lets him past

Character 3: all clear (shouting into room), go through

Character 1: silent and nods to the 'guard' "thank you"

Character 1 enters room where character 2 is sitting at a desk, he places the package on the desk as character 2 gets a knife out, character 2 then cuts the package in half and sniffs the small amount of cocaine on the knife

Character 2: (slowly nodding) that's good stuff

Character 1: it's the best you can get.

Character 2: not bad, I'll give you £12,000 for it

Character 1: (laughs sarcastically) I don't think you heard me right, Its the best you will find in these parts.


Character 2: and I said I'll give you £12,000 for it

Character 1: but it's worth £18,500 at least (short pause) you're not gonna get this quality for this price anywhere else

Character 2: (laughs and is then silent) why should I pay you this amount of money when you havent proved your worth to me before? maybe you should be looking to sell it elsewhere

Character 1: (gets up turns to leave) fine, I guess your 'customers' don't want gear that's 94% pure

Character 2: I'll tell you what, maybe my first offer was a bit low, I'll meet you halfway, £14,500

Character 1: no, that's still too low, I want the £18,500!

Character 2: You drive a hard bargain... I'll give you £17,000, that's my final offer, c'mon where else you gonna sell it?, I'm the biggest mover in these parts...

Character 1: (long pause thinks about the offer) alright, £17,000

Character 2 takes the money out of the briefcase and hands it to Character 1 who puts it in his pocket, they both stand up simultaneously and slowly shake hands, Character 1 then leaves the room and nods to character 3 as he walks past him 

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